Practical guide
How to write a winning social value bid response
Social value now accounts for a mandatory minimum of ten per cent of the total evaluation score across most UK central government and many local authority contracts. In competitive procurements, it is regularly the section that separates the winner from the runner-up. This guide covers the practical steps for writing a response that scores well — from reading the buyer's requirements correctly to building a commitment schedule that an evaluator will find credible and verifiable.

Start with the buyer's actual question
The most consequential decision in writing a social value response happens before you write a single word: understanding exactly what the buyer is asking you to respond to, and how they will score it.
Different buyers use different frameworks, and those frameworks have fundamentally different structures. A buyer using PPN 06/20 will typically ask you to respond against five named themes — COVID-19 recovery, wellbeing, helping local communities, equal opportunity, and net zero. A buyer using the National TOMs framework will be scoring against specific outcome measures with published proxy values. A buyer using SROI will expect a different kind of calculation methodology entirely. A bespoke local authority framework may have its own named priorities — a council with a declared commitment to care leavers or a housing association with a strong environmental programme will weight those themes differently from a generic framework.
The ITT document — particularly the social value question, the evaluation criteria, and any linked guidance documents — contains the answer to what this buyer is actually looking for. Read it carefully and look for: the named framework if referenced, the specific themes or headers you are asked to respond to, the word count or page limit per theme, whether quantification is explicitly required, and any example commitments the buyer has listed as relevant. These details define the structure of your response before any content decisions are made.
A response that addresses themes the buyer is not scoring, or that uses a framework structure the buyer is not applying, wastes both word count and evaluator goodwill. Structure first; content second.
Quantify, don't just assert
The central competency of a strong social value response is the ability to translate intentions into numbers — specific, sourced, citable numbers that an evaluator can assess and, later, hold you accountable against. Vague assertion and genuine quantification look superficially similar on a page but score entirely differently.
Consider two ways of writing the same commitment. The first: "We will prioritise local employment and training throughout the contract." The second: "We will recruit a minimum of two employees from long-term unemployment within six months of contract start, generating £25,308 of proxy social value at £12,654 per person per year, as measured by National TOMs Outcome TOM 1a (Creating Employment for Local People)." Both sentences describe the same underlying intention. Only the second is scoreable.
Proxy values are the mechanism that makes quantification possible. Published datasets — principally the National TOMs outcome measures, the HACT Social Value Bank, and HM Treasury Green Book unit costs — attach a recognised monetary figure to a specific social outcome. These are not estimates; they are published figures from recognised institutions that evaluators and procurement teams are familiar with. Using them correctly, and citing them accurately, demonstrates that your quantification has a defensible basis.
The social value calculator shows how these proxy values work in practice, using real published figures. A training day is valued at £320 under National TOMs. An apprenticeship year at £13,500. A local employment hire for a person from long-term unemployment at £12,654. Disability employment at £22,400 per person under the HACT Social Value Bank. Each of these figures is traceable to a published source — which is precisely what evaluators look for when they apply a credibility test to your numbers.
Where the buyer uses SROI methodology, quantification requires additional steps: applying a deadweight factor (what would have happened anyway without the contract), an attribution factor (what portion of the outcome is genuinely attributable to your organisation's activity rather than others'), and a displacement factor (whether your activity displaces equivalent activity elsewhere). See the glossary for definitions of each. These adjustments typically reduce a gross social value figure by thirty to fifty per cent, which is why a credible SROI-based response will show a lower net figure than gross — and why an overstated claim that ignores these adjustments is easy for an experienced evaluator to spot.
Common mistakes that lose marks
01Using generic CSR language
The most common failure is submitting what is essentially a corporate social responsibility statement rather than a tender response. Phrases such as "we are committed to making a positive difference" and "our people are our greatest asset" tell an evaluator nothing scoreable. PPN 06/20, National TOMs, and SROI frameworks all require evidenced, specific, deliverable commitments — not value statements. Every sentence that describes a general organisational philosophy rather than a specific, measurable commitment is a sentence that scores nothing.
02Citing figures without a source
Evaluators are trained to look for unsupported numbers. A bid response that states "we will deliver £500,000 of social value" without explaining how that figure was calculated, which proxy values were used, and where those proxy values come from will be marked down — or discounted entirely. The figure needs a methodology. Under National TOMs, that means citing the specific outcome measure and its published proxy value. Under SROI, it means showing the deadweight, attribution, and displacement adjustments that translate gross value into a defensible net figure. A number without a source is not a social value calculation; it is an assertion.
03Ignoring the buyer's specific framework
There are four main frameworks in use across UK public procurement: PPN 06/20, National TOMs, SROI, and bespoke local frameworks. They are not interchangeable. A response structured around PPN 06/20's five themes submitted to a buyer scoring against National TOMs outcome measures will misalign with the evaluation criteria — and a misaligned response scores below a weaker response that is correctly structured. Framework identification is not an optional preliminary step; it is the step that determines everything else about how the response should be organised and what language should be used.
04Commitments disproportionate to contract size
A common error among bidders new to social value is scaling commitments to the maximum plausible rather than what is proportionate and deliverable for the contract in question. A £200,000 facilities management contract that claims to deliver fifty apprenticeships and a community investment fund will not be believed. Evaluators apply a credibility test as well as a scoring test: commitments need to be feasible given the contract value, the size of the supplier's workforce on the contract, and the duration of engagement. Proportionality signals competence; implausible commitments signal the response was not written with genuine intent to deliver.
05No monitoring and reporting detail
Buyers increasingly require suppliers to explain not just what they will commit to, but how they will measure and evidence delivery. A commitment to create three apprenticeships is a weak close without a sentence explaining how apprenticeship starts will be reported, to whom, and at what frequency. Most framework guidance documents — including PPN 06/20 and the National TOMs guidance — explicitly reference monitoring as part of the social value expectation. A response that stops at the commitment and does not address verification gives evaluators a legitimate reason to doubt whether delivery will actually happen.
06Copying the same response across different tenders
A social value response written for a construction contract in one local authority area is not transferable to a domiciliary care contract in a different region without significant reworking. The framework may differ. The buyer's priority themes will differ. The relevant proxy values may differ. The plausible commitments differ entirely by sector. A response that has clearly been adapted from a template — evidenced by references to themes that do not appear in the ITT, or commitments that have no logical connection to the contract type — signals that the bidder has not engaged seriously with this buyer's requirements. Evaluators notice.
Structuring your response
The internal structure of a high-scoring social value response follows a consistent pattern, regardless of which framework the buyer is using.
Open with substance, not positioning
Do not begin your response by telling the evaluator how much your organisation cares about social value, or by describing your company's history and values. Open with a direct answer to the question. If the buyer has asked you to describe your commitments under the equal opportunity theme, the first sentence should state a specific commitment: a number, a target group, a proxy value, and a timeframe. Positioning statements consume word count and contribute nothing to the score.
Use the buyer's own headers and language
If the buyer has named their themes "Wellbeing" and "Helping Local Communities", use exactly those headers in your response. If their ITT uses specific terminology — "TOMs measures", "PPN 06/20 themes", "SROI methodology" — mirror that language. This is not about flattery; it is about making the evaluator's job easier. Evaluators reading multiple responses simultaneously are assigning scores against specific criteria. A response that clearly maps to those criteria section-by-section is easier to score highly than one that requires the evaluator to search for relevance.
Integrate figures into prose — do not isolate them
A table of commitments and proxy values is not a response. Numbers need context: what the commitment involves operationally, why it is deliverable on this specific contract, what the mechanism for delivery is, and how it will be evidenced. Integrate figures into explanatory sentences rather than listing them separately. "We will create three apprenticeships, generating £40,500 of proxy value at £13,500 per apprenticeship year under National TOMs TOM 2a" is stronger than a table row showing the same data, because the prose demonstrates understanding rather than calculation.
Match commitment scale to contract scale
Before finalising your commitment schedule, test each commitment against the realistic parameters of this contract: the workforce you will deploy on it, the duration, the value, the geography. A commitment that is demonstrably deliverable given those parameters scores higher than a larger commitment that appears implausible. Evaluators routinely reduce their confidence in an entire response if one commitment seems inflated.
Close with monitoring commitments
The final paragraph of each themed section — or a dedicated monitoring section — should describe how you will evidence delivery. Named reporting mechanisms (Social Value Portal, quarterly social value reports, annual stakeholder reviews), a named internal owner, and a specific reporting cadence demonstrate that your commitments are intended to be held to. Close with the monitoring detail; without it, commitments feel aspirational rather than operational.
How HelpMeBid helps
Each step of the process described in this guide — identifying the framework, selecting proportionate commitments, applying the right proxy values, and producing a structured written response — is handled by HelpMeBid's workflow. See how it works: upload your ITT documents, confirm the framework detected, build your commitment schedule from a library of fully referenced proxy values, and export a written narrative ready to paste into your tender response or submit as a separate social value document.
The proxy value library draws on the same published datasets referenced throughout this guide — National TOMs, HACT Social Value Bank, HM Treasury Green Book — so every figure your response contains is traceable to the same sources an evaluator will recognise. You are not generating numbers; you are applying a published methodology to a specific set of deliverable commitments.
Apply this guide to your next bid
Framework detection, proxy value calculation, and a structured written narrative — built around your buyer's actual evaluation criteria.